Summertime
Florence A. Watson
They were getting worried. It was, after
all, almost time for the summer prompt. Little groups had begun to gather in odd corners
of the clubhouse grounds, though not in the clubhouse itself—at least not in the main
part of the clubhouse. She encountered them daily; she avoided them assiduously.
The lazy sultry sounds of Leontyne Price floated out across the lawn to the Secretary
who sat leaning against a willow by the stream.
One of these mornings
You're going to rise up singing
Then you'll spread your wings
And you'll take to the sky
But till that morning
There's a'nothing can harm you
With daddy and mammy standing by
She had a perfect line of sight to the front porch on which lounged my_cnnr and
trueriver, tall frosty glasses of iced coffee beside them. They’d been visiting
for the last month, clearly enjoying the company of characters, enjoying one another’s
company too. But visiting without purpose.
It had definitely unsettled the
characters. At first none had thought anything of it. After all, community members
popped in all the time, some lingering for days as they immersed themselves in the
depths of a novel (often one they were reading for the first time, in glee, having
finally acquired it after a long search through the dusty shelves of secondhand
bookshops), while others merely visited briefly while they reacquainted themselves
with favourite passages from a much-loved novel. And, of course, from time to time,
there was a huge influx of visitors when some special celebration was on. She remembered
the flurry of excitement—and crowds—for the
five year celebrations a couple of
years ago. Then there had been that odd occasion several months back when greerwatson
and fawatson had exchanged suitcases.
(She still wasn’t quite sure what that had been
about.) But—until now—no one had ever lived here, so to speak, for weeks at a
time. And they showed no sign of leaving any time soon, either. Not that they were
not welcome. As moderators they were always welcome. But it was just a tad odd.
A little group of characters came round the side of the clubhouse, passing under the
archway of wisteria that marked the edge where patio gave way to lawn, carefully
passing to the right of the cricket game, with one side captained by Ralph, while
the other was led by Hephaistion. They were clearly making a beeline in her direction. The
Secretary sighed and put away The Hobbit: Bilbo would just have to wait; she wouldn’t
get much more reading done today.
“We have been thinking,” began Mr Straike, as soon as he reached the trees, “and we
believe it really is time you said something to the Moderators.”
No preamble, she thought (though she was careful not to say it), not even a polite
greeting. It was a measure of the increasing anxiety amongst the characters, that
someone like Gareth Straike—normally extremely old-fashioned in his insistence on
polite niceties—should fail even to say ‘hello’. Though of course, as one of the
less popular characters (even though from a much loved book), he might be wondering
if his own existence was jeopardised by how quiet the community had become the last
few weeks. Some of the lesser characters from the more obscure novels had faded away
to quite alarming translucency due to recent neglect. She supposed he was wondering
if he would be next. (She could but live in hope.)
“What would you have me say?” she asked.
“Well, I think we just have to give them a little reminder,” said Lucy eagerly. “After
all, it is almost time for the summer prompt. They must just have lost track of the
time, that’s all. They won’t want to miss the summer challenge.”
“But what if...,” Olive’s voice faded to a whisper, “I mean, it would be dreadful if....”
“Nonsense, Olive,” declared Lucy forthrightly, “I’ve told you not to go scaremongering.”
“Yes, but if....”
“If?” asked the Secretary wonderingly. Whatever was Olive on about?
“If they’ve lost interest...and want to disband the community.” Once again Olive’s
voice dropped to a whisper, albeit a horrified one. “One does hear of it happening
sometimes. And so many of the usually active community members have been...inactive...of
recent....”
“They wouldn’t forget about us.” Mr Straike spoke portentously.
“Heavens no!” exclaimed Lucy. “They just need to be roused from their holiday—that’s
all; and reminded of their duty. They do stand in positions of responsibility, after all.”
“Perhaps...,” the Secretary spoke slowly, thinking furiously even as she formed the
words. She knew the Moderators had come for a well-deserved break, and could well
imagine their responses if lectured about duty by the Straikes.
“Perhaps, what we need to do is develop our own prompt.”
Hmm...yes, she liked that idea more the more she thought about it. Why not have the
characters set the summer prompt this year? Or prompts? After all—they didn’t have
to have just one prompt this August. Why not several suggestions—one from each character?
“Our own prompt? Oooh, yes!” Olive sounded breathless with excitement.
“Our own prompt. Yes indeed; that would provide an excellent opportunity to refocus
those writers who display somewhat frivolous tendencies onto more suitable subject
matters,” Gareth Straike proclaimed heavily. “My dear,” he turned to his wife, “perhaps
you could organise a suitable committee to vet suggestions for us to forward to the
members for their inspiration.”
The Secretary looked rather startled at this suggestion, and hastily intervened. “Perhaps,”
she said, “you should leave it to me to raise the matter with my_cnnr and trueriver.”
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These interviews, conversations, and stories are written purely for
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“Summertime” was originally posted to the
maryrenaultfics
community, 27 July 2011, by fawatson.
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