Though the Brightest Fell
(Based on Mary Renault's The Charioteer)
Laurie stood in the wings as tempest roared and flashed over a blasted heath. It
occurred to him briefly that the stage had remarkable lighting for a mere school
production. Either the equipment was something rather unusual or Carter was surpassing
himself. However, his study mate could be quite ingenious, and Laurie thought no more
of it. As he played Macduff, he was not himself in this scene, and had the leisure to
look at the production with a critical eye. The witches were overplaying their role, he
considered, though they were clearly enjoying themselves. This was more than could be
said of young Barnes, who had been conscripted to play Lady Macbeth. For that matter,
Laurie himself had not intended to take part in this year s school play; but Mr Jepson
had left him little choice, appealing as he did to school spirit and the previous year s
Horatio. With his experience at fencing, the housemaster assured him, Odell could
coach the others to a spectacular climax that would thrill the juniors and terrify their mothers.
Last year, it had been his own fumbling attempts with the foil that had required
special coaching an attention from Lanyon that still guardedly thrilled him. He
felt rather guilty, therefore, at modestly accepting credit without more than token
demur. Mind you, he was not surprised that, amid his plaudits for Laurie s performance
as Horatio, Jeepers had somehow omitted to praise the person who truly deserved it. But
then, a strange silence surrounded Lanyon s departure. The talk of the dorms at the
end of the previous term, it was somehow never mentioned when the school reconvened
after the hols. Of course, in the natural way of things, Lanyon would have been gone
anyway: all his class had also left, to the family firm, or university, or Sandhurst.
For some unfathomable reason, however, the House enjoyed the dubious pleasure
of Hazell s return. Why his family had not, in the wake of scandal, sent him
to sully a clean slate at a new school Laurie could not understand. Certainly,
none of the boys thought him innocent in the matter; and, if not quite sent to
Coventry, Hazell certainly was left in no doubt that, from the perspective of his
peers, he was persona non grata. Perversely, Jeepers had taken him under
his wing. Perhaps he thought him salvageable. In Laurie s opinion, it was a
waste of effort though he recognized a certain irony, since he, too, cast the
other student as arch villain. He did not appreciate that the talent
Hazell brought to the stage had played even better in the housemaster s study.
Lurking in the wings as the witches prophesied, Laurie patted the hilt of
the foil that hung at his side. His voice was in his sword. They would meet in the final act.
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Author's Notes
1. This was written for the 2010 Spooky Challenge to the prompt “lurking”, and posted to
maryrenaultfics
on 1 November 2010 by greerwatson.
2. The following quotations from Macbeth are referenced:
– “Angels are bright still, though the brightest fell.” (4.3.22)
– “I have no words:/My voice is in my sword: thou bloodier
villain/Than terms can give thee out!” (5.8. 9-11)
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